Friday, July 18, 2008

This is somthing my TEN YEAR OLD BROTHER WROTE!!

Yes my mom is teaching us well.

Soaked with sweat
Blazing sun
Felt like I'd been
Shot with a gun.
Leaning down
Many a time
My hands covered
With red gooey slime.
Needing a break
It was so hot
I could barely think.
Finally, finally,
Our dad says we can stop.
Right when he said that
I was so happy I almost
Collapsed and dropped.
When we get back
We nearly have an
Unlimited supply
Of Strawberries.

3 comments:

Traci said...

woah...that's good.

Unknown said...

WOW!!! way to go NOAH :-)

Sherry said...

Noah keep on writing! And kudos to the teacher ;-)